Thursday, June 15, 2006

Right on target



Red bullseye beckons
Like siren song to housewife
Good thing it's payday.
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Household goods and toys,
Snacks and designer clothing,
Reasonably priced.
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Girl doesn't even
know letters of alphabet
But she knows bullseye.
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Despite shopping list
I always end up spending
way too much money.

8 witty remarks on "Right on target"

Eran of Arcadia said...

I really like your
way of describing
your trip to Target.

Eran of Arcadia said...

Oops I forgot that
haikus have seven not five
syllables Line Two.

Tracey on 8:00 PM said...

I also like it
I think it's right on Target
(Isn't that silly?)

Ha - haven't written haiku's since grade school! ;)

fatty mcslowslow on 10:03 PM said...

You guys are crazy.
I can't believe that you are
Posting in haiku.

8kids4me said...

Y'all are so silly.
I think I may take a nap
or visit with Trish.

fatty mcslowslow said...

In second haiku
Need to add one syllable
To give you seven.

Joni on 8:51 PM said...

Father says "It's just
Chemical engineering."
He thinks he's so smart.

;-) happy father's day!

J.D. Hoosier said...

Haiku is all you seem to see these days;
Blank verse is so much classier, I think.


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